Peer Review of First Ten Pages

If you submitted your First Ten Pages on time, you will have been automatically assigned two scripts from fellow students for peer review.  Go back to the original assignment for the link

Instead of generally comments (like this is really great), try to get specific with comments on:

Tone/Genre

Action Lines

Character Introduction

Setting and Mood

Writing style

Tension

Clear story lines

Dialogue

Be as positive as you can with helpful suggestions for improvement!