Proofreading and Editing
Editing
Be sure that your thesis is a clear map of your paper.
Be sure that your thesis and paper mirror eachother.
Be sure to analyze and not to summarize.
Proofreading
Be sure to introduce the author and the title of book BEFORE you quote from the book. Be sure to spell the author's and all characters' names correctly.
Be sure to keep the same tense throughout your paper.
Be sure to use 's correctly.